Talk:Theemperor
Info box
I really don't know how to do an info box so sorry about the clean up, I cant do it. If any1 wants to tell me how or do it for me, it would be greatly appreciated. :) 08:07, 29 June 2007 (PDT)
Writing this
It was so annoying having to write about mysef in 3rd person lol.
NPOV and Third person
Almost all of the article could use some significant changes towards neutrality and third-person-ness. For example, every "you" needs to be replaced with something in the third person, and all the talk about how nice and approachable he is, although may be entirely true, is going a bit far, and can definitely be disputed. Finally, the section headed "Crews" seems like blatant recruitment advertising to me. -- Thefirstdude (t/c) 22:08, 30 June 2007 (PDT)
- i've replaced the yous but cant really see how this isn't in the third person. Im not too sure whether i want to do the neutrality bits as i think that would ruin the spirit of the article and i'd rather it be a bit more than boring, encyclopedic speak to be honest.--Theemperor 12:03, 1 July 2007 (PDT)
- furthermore, anything that talks about personality is disputable as people react differntly to differnt people , i can only put what i feel to be the truth.--Theemperor 12:06, 1 July 2007 (PDT)
- This is an encyclopedia. It does not have to sound boring; it does have to sound encyclopedic. If you admit that anything about personality is disputable, perhaps this is not the right place for it, then? -- Thefirstdude (t/c) 12:43, 1 July 2007 (PDT)
- take it out if you like but I'm not willing to do so as i feel it is benificial to the article --Theemperor 14:15, 1 July 2007 (PDT)
- This article seems to be fully in third person now and I don't see any more comments outlining anything needing work here, so I've taken down that tag. I've taken a stab at eliminating the PoV- please go ahead and check that it's not missing important facts or that there's no subtle PoV remaining. --Diamondblade (54x) 06:00, 3 July 2007 (PDT)
- take it out if you like but I'm not willing to do so as i feel it is benificial to the article --Theemperor 14:15, 1 July 2007 (PDT)
- This is an encyclopedia. It does not have to sound boring; it does have to sound encyclopedic. If you admit that anything about personality is disputable, perhaps this is not the right place for it, then? -- Thefirstdude (t/c) 12:43, 1 July 2007 (PDT)
It seems pretty neutral to me - unless I am missing something. The bits that are opinions seem to be clearly stated as such. Adrielle ♥ =) 09:03, 13 October 2009 (UTC)
