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Official Talk:Brigand King Blockades

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Awkward

Additionally, Brigand King blockades involve some additional opportunities to earn wealth.

This strikes me as awkward phrasing because of the repetition of "additional". Perhaps "...some bonus opportunities..." would work better? --Ponytailguy 11:57, 24 May 2007 (PDT)

How about ". . . some extra opportunities . . ." ? Masterbratac 12:24, 24 May 2007 (PDT)
Well, come to think of it, why is the adjective even necessary? "Some opportunities" would cover it well enough. --Ponytailguy 12:31, 24 May 2007 (PDT)
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