Official Talk:Brigand King Blockades
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Awkward
- Additionally, Brigand King blockades involve some additional opportunities to earn wealth.
This strikes me as awkward phrasing because of the repetition of "additional". Perhaps "...some bonus opportunities..." would work better? --Ponytailguy 11:57, 24 May 2007 (PDT)
- How about ". . . some extra opportunities . . ." ? Masterbratac 12:24, 24 May 2007 (PDT)
- Well, come to think of it, why is the adjective even necessary? "Some opportunities" would cover it well enough. --Ponytailguy 12:31, 24 May 2007 (PDT)
