User talk:ScurvySarge

Ahoy! Do not remove the {{cleanup}} tag on the Heian Era page. You've removed it twice, but the page needs to be reformatted and rewritten. Specific issues include: the rambling nature of the text (e.g., "Tarf takes up heavy drinking. Tarf falls down."), its lack of encyclopedic value (same example), and the lack of links to other pages (especially crews and flags). --Barrister 11:43, 20 February 2006 (PST)

Ahoy, Thanks for the notification. I was wondering what ethics the entry must follow as I had noticed the cleanup tab reoccuring and wondered what within the article was causing it to be marked for cleanup. Is there somewhere I can reference, or a good example to derive ideas from? I recall the cleanup tab affixed before I added the whole History section, whereas the only documentation on the page was the crew public statement in its true form. I'll attempt to reform the whole document to be more compliant with the rules.

For a medium-sized crew article, take a look at British Sea Power. For a truly lengthy flag article, check out Silver Dawn. If you have any other questions, just let me know. There's a Talk:Heian Era page for discussion, and you can post requests for assistance there. --Barrister 13:44, 20 February 2006 (PST)