User talk:Rohir
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I reviewed your pirate-page as you requested. It was looking good, I just changed some minor things: updated the intro (added Crimson Ocean there), added some extra links and changed the ocean-category to 2 oceans (Viridian + Crimson pirate). One other thing I changed is "the very first" crew to "one of the very first"; as much as anyone likes to think they are the very first, there is not really a way to verify this info and on new oceans, several new crews and flags usually go up almost simultaneously. In my personal opinion "one of the first" is still a very strong statement + it's more encyclopedic, what we want the Yppedia to be =). Let me know if you have more questions. --Ikketje 18:57, 6 July 2009 (UTC)