User talk:Dartraider

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Article cleanup

Ahoy, mate! I restored the cleanup tag on Shark Raiders. The history section is still rough - a bit rambling, some grammar issues, formatting, etc., and the intro paragraph could be more neutral. Feel free to take a stab at the cleanup yourself, or just continue to add content. There are a couple wiki users who go through and regularly put the finishing touches on articles, so don't worry if the polishing isn't your cup of tea. Thanks for updating the article, and I certainly look forward to seeing more there - especially about your history. --AtteSmythe 10:44, 11 January 2006 (PST)