Talk:Senior officer
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For what it's worth, I also got rid of some passive voice usage, which, as our English teachers have taught us, is evil. :P (I modified it slightly in a few other places as well, to improve the sentence structure. The changing of "less" or "more" to "different" and such is the main fix, though. :) --20:50, 3 March 2006 (PST)
