Talk:Ocean Invaders

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hi everybody! welcome to the crew forum :D

well Guys, i have created our crew page,because i think we deserve to have our own page,don't u think so? i spend many hours on doing it,i know it isn't perfect,but its all what i can do;i expect u all enjoy it ;) fair winds,maari


Hey, I found this page in recent changes, you need to rewrite it in third person, fix up the problems in your info boxes, make in more encyclopedic (um... I have no idea of the right word for that), and then your probably going to need to fix some other things, but for now, I can't see past those problems. Anyway, good luck, and look at the guidelines for crew pages. Also, your really not supposed to use a yppedia talk page for your crew forum. --Patato6 02:16, 9 July 2008 (UTC)