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Yeah Yeah, I read the Neutral point of view rules now :)..

This is going to sound terribly harsh, but please use the preview button rather than the save button. The flood of minor grammatical and spelling mistakes you are fixing one at a time is rather spammy on the recent changes page.

No, its not harsh, no problems. Sorry I didnt know it recorded my changes and was spamming anything. I was doing it bit at a time while sailing in game. :). Is this page ok now? or do i need to rewrite most of the page and make it more non biased?

Actually, I'm not sure if it's actually biased or not. It may be, but I accidentally used the Neutrality template when I meant to use the Third-Person template. At least my mistake made you read the Neutral Point of View rules.--Zyborg22 07:39, 6 September 2005 (PDT)

It is probably best not to delete the entire discussion page for an article. Even if the points noted have been fixed, it is good to have it for future examination. --Bia 09:50, 6 September 2005 (PDT)