Portal talk:Voyages/Intro
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The link to sea monster hunt is broken. --Alfwyn 22:09, 21 December 2008 (UTC)
- Just one more point, the sub-sentence beginning with "& officers" should probably refer to trading, but the whole sentence could need some restructuring in my opinion. --Alfwyn 22:13, 21 December 2008 (UTC)
Fixed the link. A suggestion on how to reword the sentence in question? I'm at work at the moment and don't have the time to re-work it right now. -- Cedarwings (talk) 00:17, 22 December 2008 (UTC)
