Talk:Revelations

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Revelations has mentioned that he's the captain of a crew with this line: "But this did not last for long as, by tha second day he was experienced enough to embark on his own journey in captainism and became the captain of the crew The New Beginning." I believe that was done after the Vanity notice was put up. The article could still use some cleanup, as it's a huge paragraph that could stand to be separated into multiple paragraphs. --Thunderbird 18:17, 29 September 2005 (PDT)