User talk:Muffynz/Featured article draft
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My only real suggestion: perhaps it would be wise to use a picture of another BK? (Barnabas is also on the notice board, so he's getting a lot of exposure) --Ponytailguy 20:51, 24 May 2007 (PDT)
- How about the new guy? Does he have a portrait? --Guppymomma 20:53, 24 May 2007 (PDT)
- Done and done. I have small images of all the BK's now if you feel any other one would work or want to rotate once a week or something. --Muffynz 20:59, 24 May 2007 (PDT)
- I've finally read over it and think it reads fine. I'm going to hold off on installing it for a little bit until they turn flotillas back on though. Sound fair enough? --Guppymomma 22:04, 26 May 2007 (PDT)
- One little thing... you say the flotilla board looks identical to a blockade board. This is not strictly true - it only has one safe zone, and never has any buoys (so, it's like a between-round blockade with only one safe zone). -- Thefirstdude (t/c) 22:58, 26 May 2007 (PDT)
- Aye, I pondered that point and was trying to come up with a re-write on the sentence to include the fact that it does only have 1 safe zone. Just haven't had the time yet and it doesn't seem all that urgent what with the flotillas being temporarily pulled and all that. --Muffynz 23:23, 26 May 2007 (PDT)
- I changed it to "similar" instead and that should probably suffice as they can go to the flotilla page to read more 'bout it. Good catch. --Guppymomma 07:26, 27 May 2007 (PDT)
- Aye, I pondered that point and was trying to come up with a re-write on the sentence to include the fact that it does only have 1 safe zone. Just haven't had the time yet and it doesn't seem all that urgent what with the flotillas being temporarily pulled and all that. --Muffynz 23:23, 26 May 2007 (PDT)
- One little thing... you say the flotilla board looks identical to a blockade board. This is not strictly true - it only has one safe zone, and never has any buoys (so, it's like a between-round blockade with only one safe zone). -- Thefirstdude (t/c) 22:58, 26 May 2007 (PDT)
- I've finally read over it and think it reads fine. I'm going to hold off on installing it for a little bit until they turn flotillas back on though. Sound fair enough? --Guppymomma 22:04, 26 May 2007 (PDT)
- I agree it would be clunky to add something about the single safe zone - however, how about changing the sentence The flotilla board...functions mostly like a sinking blockade. to The flotilla board...functions mostly like a sinking blockade that is between rounds.? -- Thefirstdude (t/c) 16:59, 29 May 2007 (PDT)
- Done and done. I have small images of all the BK's now if you feel any other one would work or want to rotate once a week or something. --Muffynz 20:59, 24 May 2007 (PDT)
- I'm fine with either wording. I'll be "installing" this tomorrow morning if flotillas don't break again tonight. --Guppymomma 20:39, 29 May 2007 (PDT)
- Morning/afternoon. Sorry, had to rush into work early for a conference call. It's in now. Thanks for working on this everyone. --Guppymomma 15:16, 30 May 2007 (PDT)
