Talk:Sindaia
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I still have some work to do with the biography section, but so far.. is it too long? too boring? Any feedback would be greatly appreciated! --Sindaia 18:26, 10 September 2006 (PDT)
- It's looking good, just write what you can, keeping it in third person and NPOV as you have done so far :) --Angelbeaver (talk) 08:23, 11 September 2006 (PDT)
Hi Sindaia, I did a miniscule amount of editing on it last night, but really it looks good to me - is there anything in particular about it that you feel isn't right? Otherwise, I'd say you've done a great job! --Sante 14:59, 11 September (PDT)
- I don't know exactly what it is, but it just doesn't seem (to me) to roll very well. Maybe the best way to describe it is that it's just a bunch of sentences thrown together, rather than a story. Or maybe I'm just being overly-critical :p And thanks for the help! --Sindaia 15:09, 11 September 2006 (PDT)
