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Would you like me to fix it properly this time Barrister? =\

If you're going to clean it up, please add appropriate links for the various islands and things and update the information regarding August since that was 8 months ago. Thanks. --Barrister 17:19, 1 April 2006 (PST)
Tell me if i did a good job or if it still needs more work and ill get to it if it does --32083 17:39, 1 April 2006 (PST)
Please the templates for linking island names. Example: {{viridian|Dragon's Nest}}. --Barrister 18:13, 1 April 2006 (PST)
Done. Anything else or is it complete for now?

After some thought, I removed most of the text as being non-encylopedic and incorrect. The "welcome" message was non-encylopedic. Their desire to build shops on Lima and Dragon's Nest makes no sense because those islands are controlled by the Ringers; shops can't be built there. I appreciate your effort to clean it up, but sometimes the page isn't really salvageable. --Barrister 22:47, 1 April 2006 (PST)

Who says the page isn't really salvageable? Based on a previous flag page I've created, I have compeletely edited the page, and removed the stub tag. I trust that this edit is acceptable? I was careful not to make any mistakes. Originally, I put links to the not yet created page of all the captains in the crews (specifically in titled), but I removed some of the links to the 'lesser' captains, such as ones for extremely small crews, or dormant captains. When I get time, I will create pages for the other crews in the flag, to get rid of some of the red. Cafc Idol 04:21, 27 July 2006 (PDT)
Note that the comment was made over three months ago, when the page included the content: "Currently their focus is on building shoppes located on Dragon's Nest and Lima Island and expanding their flag.", which is unencyclopedic. This content was then removed, and the page started afresh. --Nicksterv 04:52, 27 July 2006 (PDT)