Talk:VALIANT FALCONS

Proposed deletion because this page makes my eyes bleed, and nobody really appears to want to clean it up. Putting in a public statement in mostly caps, nearly all misspelled just isn't fun to read. --Flamer 09:15, 9 November 2006 (PST)

Oppose

 * 1) Oppose I took the time to clean up the grammar, spelling, capitalization and formatting issues.  The text of the article has not changed but it should be in a more presentable format.  Sorry atteSmythe, I was making a major edit while you were making your minor one.  I hope you don't mind that I clubbed yours in favor of mine.  --Kgarrett1969 10:09, 9 November 2006 (PST)
 * 2) * Not at all - your change is much more comprehensive. --AtteSmythe 10:11, 9 November 2006 (PST)
 * 3) Oppose The cleaned-up version is acceptable.  --Barrister 23:28, 12 November 2006 (PST)
 * 4) Oppose deletion. When an article is messy, it needs a cleanup tag, not a deletion tag.  Ditto what Barrister says as well. --Guppymomma 06:16, 13 November 2006 (PST)

Neutral

 * 1) Undecided At the risk of sounding like a barrelstopper, a crew's public statement says a lot about it. I agree that the article seems doomed never to have more than the opening sentence written, though. In any case, I took a moment to fix the page and stub it, so it won't need the cleanup tag any more. --AtteSmythe 09:57, 9 November 2006 (PST)