Talk:Redsam

Rewriting in the Third Person
Mate it's great to see you taking an interest in your pirates page on the wiki but you need to remember that this is an encyclopedia of sorts. There is some great content in your article but you need to write it all in third person which means removing all the 'I's, 'Me's and 'We's. Other than that you are well on your way to a great page. Have fun editing your page. --Kgarrett1969 12:06, 24 October 2006 (PDT)