Talk:Darkpheonix

I put up the template on this article because the cleanup tag was added over a month ago. On April 8, to be exact. But nothing has been done since then. If nobody's interested in fixing a page, is it really something we want on here? --Thunderbird 22:22, 29 May 2006 (PDT)

I re-wrote the article so it is up-to-date. I would like an opinion and maybe suggestions for corrections. Thank you. :D - Darkpheonix June 4, 2006


 * The biography section still reads as a giant lump of information and is rather off-putting. Try breaking out some of the information about the crews and flags into those articles and instead concentrate on the pirate.  Also, try condensing the major trends of the biography instead of chronicling every week's activity.  Subheadings could be very useful here.--Fiddler 13:27, 4 June 2006 (PDT)

Ok I cut out alot of the crew/flag stuff and left it to the Accomplishments and Former Crews subtitles. Comments/Suggestions? All are appriciated. Thanks. :) - Darkpheonix 20:27, 4 June 2006 (PDT)