Talk:The Night Owls

I could try to fix the POV of this article if some guidence as to what the problem was were provided. My only guess is calling the organization of seraph's nightmare dictatorial raised some eyebrows, but SN is very open about that. Vari 09:37, 23 August 2005 (PDT)


 * Yes, the word dictatorial is exactly what raised my eyebrows. It's a word that conveys a very harsh meaning.  If it's accurate, then it's appropriate to use it.  Can you footnote the article with links to forum posts or other indications that support this?  That's usually the easiest way to support the use of "strong" words.  --Barrister 10:25, 23 August 2005 (PDT)


 * Seraph's Nightmare's YPPedia page says it's an autocracy. I've changed the wording here to reflect that. Hopefully this clears up any NPOV concerns. --Vari 14:19, 23 August 2005 (PDT)


 * Great. Thanks!  --Barrister 14:40, 23 August 2005 (PDT)