Talk:Redemption

Cleanup
I added a cleanup tag for some of the phrases I feel are biased or have no place in an encyclopedic work. Most notably: "The crew was down, but nothing could stop these great puzzlers"; "The re-rise of this crew would not have been possible without the likes of the briliant officers and pirates"; "There's nothing more dangerous than a WOUNDED BEAR rising again..." however removing all those phrases cold would leave very little article so I'd like to see them re-phrased in some way.--Muffynz 22:40, 31 October 2006 (PST)