Talk:Kakraphoon Island (Sage)/Kakraphoon XII

I question the necessity of this page - maybe I've simply not been paying attention, but I don't recall seeing an article of commentary for any other blockade on the YPPedia. Don't get me wrong, it actually makes for quite an interesting read, but I'm not entirely certain if it's appropriate for YPPedia, and if it's fair that only this one blockade gets its own blow-by-blow commentary. If it is deemed useful, though, some attention needs to be spent in ensuring that the tone of voice is consistent throughout the whole article. It feels at times as though more than one person wrote the article, or at least that one person wrote it over a long period of time. The spelling of some words would change from paragraph to paragraph, as would capitalisation and use of abbreviation for ship, crew, and flag names. --Belthazar451 09:20, 26 April 2008 (PDT)


 * Due to me trying to promote the recording of blockades within all Oceans (currently mainly on Sage), I decided that the information on the wiki regarding the actual blockades was rather sparse. And so took it upon myself to run a re-occurring event to get better descriptions of the blockades. This particular article was written by Ship of Sage Ocean. Forum competition In my defence, it was the first attempt at the competition, and with your permission, I would like to take your comments away and insert them into the guidelines of the event. --Fearlessphil 09:26, 26 April 2008 (PDT)


 * Sounds fair - good luck with it. I don't mean to sound harsh, but a bit of consistency is good, as is good spelling and grammar. Feel free to do with my suggestions as you wish. It's also worth looking into the reqirements for the wiki itself, such as the Capitalization section of the YPPedia Style Guide page, and other similar links. The Community Portal is a good start. =) --Belthazar451 09:58, 27 April 2008 (PDT)