User talk:Seadogjoe

I'm really sorry, but your entry for Rudoc doesn't fit the style required by a Wiki. It's obvious you spent a lot of time on it, but it's not in the right style. You should write entries like you'd find in an encyclopedia. I suggest you look at an encyclopedia entry for a famous person like Albert Einstein or Abraham Lincoln. The opening paragraphs of each should give you a sense of what belongs here. --Barrister 15:27, 25 October 2005 (PDT)

Ahoy again! I've trimmed down your text for The Riskbreakers. The basic content was good, but it was very repetitive. When writing an article for YPPedia, try to be direct and to the point. Your text provided numerous examples for an overall crew principle, when stating that principle was sufficient. I hope you'll continue to contribute to the wiki. --Barrister 11:18, 5 November 2005 (PST)

cleanup tags
Stop removing the tag from the Rudoc page. It's there for a reason. There are still numerous spelling errors and capitalization errors. Further, the page needs more links to related wiki pages. This is the third time you've removed the tag. If you do it again (without sufficient cleanup), you will be blocked from editing the wiki for at least a week. --Barrister 12:19, 20 November 2005 (PST)