Talk:Cutthroatale

What specifically is wrong with this page? Its not Wikipedia like but as far as I can tell it seems YPPedia suitable? --Lizzie 07:29, 1 March 2007 (PST)


 * Just glancing it over quickly, it seems to have two major issues: some points of questionable grammatical correctness, and it has long blocks of text, which are not very conducive to reading. It needs to be divided up into more sections, and its grammatical problems fixed, as well as some of the irrelevant content rephrased so that it is relevant (such as the "school started and the pirate was deleted").  -- Thefirstdude 07:48, 1 March 2007 (PST)