User talk:Skippy6

The preview button is your friend, and will help prevent you filling up the recent changes page with 30 edits to the same page. Thanks and have a nice day! --Vurogj 04:14, 22 August 2007 (PDT) --Kgarrett1969 04:29, 22 August 2007 (PDT)
 * I posted this to expand a bit upon what Vurog has talking about. --Kgarrett1969 04:29, 22 August 2007 (PDT)

Crew Pages standardization
Ahoy mate. I made a couple of minor corrections to the crew page for The VIP's. Firstly I resorted Sholl back into the SO list in the infobox. For crew pages the SO list is alphabetical even if the pirate in question is the First Mate of the crew. If you really want to note that a pirate is First Mate you can include a line about it in the History section. Also the history section should really be a narative of the crew and read like an encyclopedia entry. You had changed it to be a bulleted list. I reverted it back to a narative as it just reads better that way. If you want help with writing up naratives for your crew's page just leave me a message and I'll be happy to write something up. And while I'm at it welcome to the YPPedia it is great to see that you are so interested in improving your pirate's and crew's articles. --Kgarrett1969 06:21, 22 August 2007 (PDT)
 * Ahoy again. I just wanted to let you know that I tweak the article about The VIP's again.  I took out all the dead links in the SO section of the infobox becasue the standard is that only the SOs who have articles for their pirate should have links.  I also reworded the history a bit.  Really the information is the same but the article as a whole should be about The VIP's and not about Golfgurl and Sholl.  If you wish to write a history about Golfgurl and or Sholl you can do so as thier own articles.  Articles about a crew should be just that an article about a crew.  As I said, the same information is there but now is provided as it relates to the crew itself.  Really it is good to see that you are taking such a great interest in writing articles.  Keep up the work and if you have questions please do not hesitate to leave me a message. --Kgarrett1969 09:27, 28 August 2007 (PDT)