Talk:Jollyrodger

"Jolly says talk away"

Cleanup
You need to correct the spelling; perhaps you could copy and paste the text into a word processor and use spell check. The beginning letter of all sentences should be capitalized and there should be a space after the end of each sentence. Sentences do not end with multiple periods. It may help if you read the article out loud to yourself to make sure it makes sense and uses grammatical english. As has been mentioned to you, you need to look CAREFULLY at the YPPedia:Sample pirate page, Attesmythe and Barrister for some ideas of what a good encyclopedic pirate article looks like. --Guppymomma 21:03, 12 July 2006 (PDT)