User talk:Xifl

Grammar, punctuation, and spelling corrections made to Sunset Knights (flag) page:
As we grow and expand we'll become more involved with the political structure of the ocean with the final asperation of controlling an archipelago.

As we grow and expand, we'll become more involved with the political structure of the ocean, with the final aspiration of controlling an archipelago.

Captains of crews will recieve a position of royalty along with one senior officer if crew size is adequate.

Captains of crews will receive a position of royalty, as will one senior officer if crew size is adequate.

Grammar, punctuation, and spelling corrections made to Sunset Knights (crew) page:
All sailors are welcome and if ye prove worthy and are of open '''mind. Then''' ye too can join our crew.

All sailors are welcome; and if ye prove worthy and are of open mind, then ye too can join our crew.

...given approval by their sponsered officer.

...given approval by their sponsoring officer.

Promotions are not always based on the above listed standards and should you prove yourself capable and trustworthy can advance without meeting the forementioned requirements.

Promotions are not always based on the above listed standards, and should you prove yourself capable and trustworthy, you can advance without meeting the aforementioned requirements.

We are here to have fun and if your not having fun then you are not playing the game right.

We are here to have fun, and if you're not having fun then you are not playing the game right.

We would like all members to be active in support of the crew and flag and everyone has a say in it's direction.

We would like all members to be active in support of the crew and flag, and everyone has a say in its direction.

Corrections
Ahoy! I've reverted your edits to Sunset Knights and Sunset Knights (crew). Public statements are meant to be copied exactly how they are in-game. Please ignore any mistakes in public statements if they are correctly copied from in-game. Fair winds! --Addihockey (talk/contribs) 15:07, 31 January 2009 (UTC)